Again, sorry for the delay in getting back to the story. I’m really working to push it forward, because I’ve been traveling again the past week or so. The more time that passes before I write the narrative from my notes (right after I realize I’ve been traveling, I write long-hand notes to get the basics down), the more it reads like fiction, and that’s not what I want. It may well all be fiction, but when it sounds like it to me, some of the feeling is gone. It’s just not what I’m trying to communicate.
I’ve added a bit to Living In the Past, and will get a big portion of the rest of my first trip back done by the end of the week.
Thanks for reading.
